Looks great! I think you used a different method (even for a two-strand ringbolt). I have a two-strand on my DMLE, constructed by tying a constrictor knot as far forward on the grip as possible. Leave 'loooong' tag ends, then alternate half hitches in opposite directions to the end of the handle. Keep the hitches as straight as possible down the belly of the grip. Pass the tag ends through the lanyard hole in opposite directions when you get to that point, and finish as you like. The three strand as on my YKCG is more complicated, but close-up pictures may help show the detail...

Interestingly, the way the knot begins on the grip creates a functional finger stop when choking up on the blade. Since the YK choil isn't big enough for an index finger (without modification), I find this wrap configuration on this knife to be 100% to my liking. In fact, every hike/camp/backcountry trip I took this past summer ended up with this knife along for the ride. When decision time came (that is, "which fixed blade will be worth the weight?"), this was the answer every time.