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Re: JYD Death Chat II
[Re: Evolute]
#315217
11/09/09 04:38 AM
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coyotebc
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Hey Evolute What are you up to tonight
The stripes of a tiger don't wash away.
Be a man of steel not clay
JYD #102
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Re: JYD Death Chat II
[Re: coyotebc]
#315218
11/09/09 04:41 AM
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Evolute
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I went food shopping. Working on various business promotion crap, and just finished writing this series and posting it online.
I'm glad to finally get that out of my system.
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Re: JYD Death Chat II
[Re: Evolute]
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11/09/09 04:45 AM
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coyotebc
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Was that part 5 that you just finished
The stripes of a tiger don't wash away.
Be a man of steel not clay
JYD #102
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Re: JYD Death Chat II
[Re: Evolute]
#315221
11/09/09 04:51 AM
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coyotebc
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Hang on I'll give it a read now
The stripes of a tiger don't wash away.
Be a man of steel not clay
JYD #102
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Re: JYD Death Chat II
[Re: coyotebc]
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11/09/09 04:52 AM
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Evolute
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OK, let me know what you think.
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Re: JYD Death Chat II
[Re: coyotebc]
#315223
11/09/09 05:01 AM
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coyotebc
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First off that photo is simply stunning. Once again well written. I agree, it is demonstrated very easily. When my daughter was in photography class in high school one of the projects was to duplicate on in their book. Every picture was similar but unique even when the same model was used
The stripes of a tiger don't wash away.
Be a man of steel not clay
JYD #102
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Re: JYD Death Chat II
[Re: coyotebc]
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11/09/09 05:05 AM
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Evolute
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Thanks.
So, it's clear enough? That's good to know, before the broader public sees it, in the morning.
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Re: JYD Death Chat II
[Re: Evolute]
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11/09/09 05:09 AM
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Magnum22
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JYD #7
Preserve the Yard.
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Re: JYD Death Chat II
[Re: Evolute]
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11/09/09 05:11 AM
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coyotebc
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I find it well written and easy to understand (all 5 parts) One thing I do like is that at no time do you give the impression that you are talking down to your readers.
The stripes of a tiger don't wash away.
Be a man of steel not clay
JYD #102
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Re: JYD Death Chat II
[Re: Magnum22]
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11/09/09 05:12 AM
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Evolute
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No, I combined more than one part into part 5.
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Re: JYD Death Chat II
[Re: Evolute]
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11/09/09 05:16 AM
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coyotebc
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But it was still easy to follow. Not sure how easy it would be to understand if I hadn't read the first 4 parts already. But it was the last in a series so any reader should understand that and start at the beginning
The stripes of a tiger don't wash away.
Be a man of steel not clay
JYD #102
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